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Another state of being by ~leenaangelwing:iconleenaangelwing:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Lyrical


I had to leave this plane
I had to see how far I'd go
to realize my pain
and find out what is "me" again

I had to close my door
To open up my window
To spread open my blinds
So maybe I could see again

I had to walk away
So I could run back to my home
So I could feel the air
now maybe I can breathe again

So now I gave up life
And now I gave up what I had
But now I found a place
A place where I can finally be again

I found another place
I found another time
I found another world
Where I could say I found peace inside of me
I found another heart
I found another mind
I found another soul
Another state of being

If I wasn't a boy
If I wasn't a girl either
Then just what would I be
Just maybe I am not human

If I am not a saint
If I am not a sinnner
Then tell me what am I
Half devil and half angel

I found another place
I found another time
I found another world
Where finally found peace inside of me

I found another heart
I found another mind
I found another soul
Another state of being

So don't you act like you know me
And don't you act like I'm your child
Don't act like you know right and wrong
Don't act like my dreams are impossibilities

So don't you act like you've helped me
and don't you act like youre my god
Don't act like this place is my home
Because I know my reality

I know I may be lost in time
I know I may be lost in space
I know I may be lost in mind
but when I was lost I found this place

So no I now am not your daughter
So no I now am not your son
Half demon and half angel in my
Altered state of being

I found another place
I found another time
I found another world
Where finally found peace inside of me

I found another heart
I found another mind
I found another soul
Another state of being

I have found my home
(Another state of being)
I have found my heart
(Another state of being)
I'm not right or wrong
(Anotehr state of being)
I can finally be
(Anotehr sate of being)
I am what I want
(another state of being)
I think what I think
(another state of being)
I feel what I feel
(another state of being)
I say what is real
ANOTHER SATE OF BEING!

I found another place
I found another time
I found another world
Where finally found peace inside of me

I found another heart
I found another mind
I found another soul
Another state of thinking!
Another state of feeling!
Another state of Knowing
Another state of being!
©2003-2008 ~leenaangelwing
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I was depressed through act of parents (god I hate them) and suddenly, after talking to my best sis roxy, I sorta just found myself in another mental state all together, the world kinda looked painted on, and I ended up writing this, I figured it would sorta be rockish, I don't know make up your own tune, I know what I had in my head ^ ^
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~matt-catt:iconmatt-catt: Jul 20, 2003, 3:08:55 AM
See now this is why your such a good writer. i can actualy hear a tune in my head for this (note to self: create tab for this). please dont worry us again by just saying goodbye. we dont want you to go

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~mindbender:iconmindbender: Jul 20, 2003, 10:09:56 AM
Yes, matt-catt is very right!! You write great stuff. Now only if I was a musician then maybe I could come up with some music for this, but alas, I am just a philosopher. Anyway, welcome back, wait.... Your different now, your not who you once were, so I cant welcome you back. So. hello there. Wanna be friends?

The Lone Traveler
Mind Bender

PS: Oh yea, a plus fav since your so good!!

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~-pink:icon-pink: Jul 20, 2003, 2:11:51 PM
Told you you write good! Now keep doing it or I'm gonna have to bite your face!!!

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~undeadkrunchy:iconundeadkrunchy: Jul 20, 2003, 4:22:48 PM
Very good! Me likee. ^_^ I was wondering when you'd put some more up...you're getting as bad as I am!

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~calmfixup:iconcalmfixup: Jul 20, 2003, 9:19:38 PM
Already made a wicked riff for this in my head! I might just have to go play it...
Nice Work...

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~x-atm093:iconx-atm093: Aug 2, 2003, 2:01:34 AM
See, Leena, you ARE a great writer. I don't ever want you to leave again.

And don't ever let your parents get to you like that again, or I'm going to have to come over and have a nice little 'chat' with them.

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